Poems with Similes and Metaphors

4/3/2012

Please post them below. Remember the purpose of using similes and metaphors. It is to make your poems more descriptive to make images in the readers minds to explain or show what the author of the poem is feeling or doing.

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4/3/2012 06:08:39 pm

The bombs were thundering feet,
or music with messy beats.

They are dropped from the sky,
made by flying mechanical eyes.

We go somewhere safe,
and hope where we are won't be our grave.

Man, these bombs are as destructive as monsters.
just hope that we don't get them next time.

8/10/2016 09:26:54 am

i see simile

Syd

4/3/2012 06:48:40 pm

Intro: I did my poem on roads:) Ok, that's a little off the popular list but who cares? Anyways on to the poem!

The roads are slithering snakes,
with stretching paths it makes.

People scurrying as fast as mice,
a traffic jam? That won't be nice

Everyone's going up or down,
To the hills or on the ground.

Everyday it's always busy,
there's no telling where you'll be.

Cars, buses, all of those,
left and right, it all goes.

8/10/2016 09:27:58 am

nice

mint

4/3/2012 07:29:52 pm

Imagine a rainforest...
Wet, humid,vivid it will be,
Beans growing on tall trees.
The canopy sheild the rainforest,
like an umbrella sheilds me.
Look up and see the leaves,
their pattern weaves and weaves.
Roots as long as boots,
and trees that grow delicous fruits.

Anirudh is still not RUDE

4/3/2012 07:43:35 pm

My dad is like a sun,
always having fun.

My mom is like a dove,
always give me love.

My brother is a genious superhero,
always protecting me from getting a zero

My sister is a mockinjay,
always gaurding me her way.

bush is my name

4/3/2012 08:09:05 pm

topic:WATER
Water is like a melted mirror
flowing on to the glacier

smashing on to the shore
while people eating s'mores

Its water!!!
growing taller

its like a gigantic mirror
covering up the quivering land

Fong

4/3/2012 08:31:03 pm

Hey you do the same topic!

Fong

4/3/2012 08:24:55 pm

Water:
It is smooth like cloth.
Where some animals live there, like moth.

It reflects your wonderful life.
When it splashes it is sharp as a knife.

But may it do harm to those who stay under the water too long.
And when that times come to death the bell goes "dong."

Hin Jericho or HIn Lesnar call me anything

4/3/2012 08:59:51 pm

My dad is like a tiger,
he is a food hunter.

My mom is a sword,
always protecting me from getting bored.

My sister is like a color blue,
always relaxing and act cool.

My brother is like a wrestler,
beating me up like Brock Lesnar.

My dog is a wild beast,
always distracting me from a feast.

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1/17/2013 02:19:24 am

its stupid

Mr. Mitch

1/17/2013 08:42:26 am

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DIA

4/3/2012 09:03:00 pm

An ocean,
is like a shiny, engine of motion.

It is moody,
and like a mirror of beauty.

It is full of aqautic creatures,
like a craddle of a mother.

It is blue,
that gives us a clue,

Peace and Destruction,
Accseptance and Rejection!

Hin

4/3/2012 09:03:23 pm

My dad is like a tiger,
they call him a fish hunter.

My mom is like a sword,
protecting me from getting bored.

My brother is like a wrestler,
beating me up like Brock Lesnar.

My dog is a wild beast,
always distracting me from a feast.

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4/3/2012 09:51:34 pm

My friend made a splash,
when he dash in the water.

He cause an earthquake,
because of his weigh.

My mother is like a teacher,
always teaching me.

earth

4/3/2012 10:22:32 pm

A friend is like a mystery
still to be discovered
wanting to be figured out

A friend is like a book
always very clever
waiting to be read

A friend is an open hand
that always help when we need

A friend is like a wing
that guides you on your way

--__--.....kwan......^__^

4/3/2012 10:37:32 pm

My Friends:

My friends are awsome,
like the flower's blossom.

My friends are cool,
like water in the pool.

My friends are nice,
my friends are rile.

My friends are pretty,
in their own style.

My friends make me laugh,
during my craft.....

And we even loved to play,
like a bird chiurping all day!

Harry dot dot dot :D

4/3/2012 11:05:06 pm

TOPIC: SOLDIER AND WAR

When people argues,
They always have a fight.

Soldiers fighting and risking their life
they have only one chance, so use it right.

No time to loose,
they need to move.

Soldiers are like the protectors,
always helping and offering.

Everyday and every night,
Soldiers pray for peace and rights.

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3/29/2013 09:01:40 pm

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3/29/2013 09:02:56 pm

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3/29/2013 09:46:49 pm

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3/30/2013 04:49:23 am

poo face ur ar

hadouken

5/10/2013 03:32:42 am

shoryouken....ryu is awesome :D

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6/24/2013 06:19:13 pm

My younger sister
My young sister is like a monkey
she chlimb she sees it's high.
She is a clown she is really funny
she have really cool jokes
she love school ans she is really cool

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